Feedback for Staging Post 2

Suggestions	Reflections
Choice of storyboard	We pick the fourth storyboard out of our four original ones for following reasons.1. creativity. The story is seen from a HK girl basketball player, who sees the Morey issue as an ordinary people, and offers genuine reactions. 2. Authentic settings. The story happens in HK streets and schools, which just mirrors our audience’s lives and invokes resonance. 3. Malleability. The story is potential for lots of changes, since our protagonist is completely created out of the background issue.
Incorporation of other storyboards	We adopts the life of a Chinese fan into our protagonist’s life and adjusts accordingly; We mirrors the NBA player LeBron’s story into an ordinary basketball player’s life, and makes some adjustments.
need to dig a little deeper in terms of storytelling.	We try to combine four different perspectives of four storyboards from staging post 2 into a complete story arc. Also, we make the new story seem deeper by showing some transitions in the main character’s mind through some events. Besides, we make the main character become a collection of contradictions to reveal our theme: sometimes cultural conflicts are unresolvable.
a few more sources may be needed to add perspective and depth to your story.	In terms of research, we searched chinese mainland websites, american websites, and HK websites to try to understand and analyze the thoughts of different sides of people. We believe by our hard efforts, our stories are now more complex and deep. Additionally, we collected many real pictures online to present our prototype so that it seems more persuasive.
Think about the story more spatially and envision more clearly the user experience.	First, we created our script and pictures for all the scenes in our story arc. Then, we looked for suitable scenes and recorded videos for that. We also took some panorama using google street view to make our story more spatial. We tried to stand on our audiences' sides and hope they can have a better VR experience.To allow audiences to better enjoy our story, we also add some sound effects and character’s lines.
Try not to make the story too one-sided.	We first make the main character become a collection of contradictions. She and her teammates gradually changed their thoughts to a less strong extent by experiencing some major events. Our story also included people from different sides, such as HK people, Chinese mainland people, and American people. We tried to present their thoughts towards Morey's action as well so that the story will not be too one-sided. Finally, we aim to reveal that sometimes cultural conflicts are unresolvable, so our story includes different cultural beliefs of different individuals instead of a single side.