Review Getting started section

docs/docs/getting-started.md

@@ -1,14 +1,13 @@
 # Getting started
+To get started quickly, we'll walk you through the standard demo setup, which includes:
 
-To get started quickly, let's walk you through our standard demo setup consisting of 
+* A cluster of three `hydra-nodes`, each directly connected to the others and configured with one of three Hydra credentials: `Alice`, `Bob`, or `Carol`
+* A single `cardano-node` producing blocks used as a (very fast) local `devnet`
+* The `hydra-tui` example for clients to interact with the individual `hydra-node`.
 
-- a cluster of three `hydra-node`, directly connected to each other, each having access to one of three Hydra credentials `alice`, `bob`, or `carol`;
-- a single `cardano-node` producing blocks used as a (very fast) local `devnet`;
-- the `hydra-tui` example clients to interact with the individual Hydra nodes.
+This tutorial uses [Docker](https://www.docker.com/get-started) to install the nodes, so ensure Docker is installed. If you want to explore alternative ways of running the tools, see the [variant tutorial](./getting-started-without-docker.md) or the [testnet tutorial](./tutorial/index.md), which uses pre-built binaries. The documentation pages on [installation](./installation) and [configuration](./configuration) provide more details.
 
-This tutorial will be using [Docker](https://www.docker.com/get-started) to install and the nodes, so make sure to have it installed. If you want to explore alternative ways of running the tools, see this [tutorial variant](./getting-started-without-docker.md) or the [testnet tutorial](./tutorial/index.md) does use pre-built binaries, while documentation pages on [installation](./installation) and [configuration](./configuration) provide more details.
-
-Also, the `hydra-tui` does use the HTTP/WebSocket API provided by the `hydra-node` behind the scenes. The [testnet tutorial](./tutorial/index.md) will show how to use this API using low-level commands or see the [API reference](/api-reference).
+Additionally, the `hydra-tui` uses the HTTP/WebSocket API provided by the `hydra-node` behind the scenes. The [testnet tutorial](./tutorial/index.md) will show how to use this API using low-level commands, or you can see the [API reference](https://hydra.family/head-protocol/unstable/api-reference) for more details.
 
 <details>
 <summary>Video demonstration (a bit dated)</summary>
@@ -23,7 +22,7 @@ These instructions have been tested only on Linux environments (Ubuntu, NixOS).
 
 ## Preparation
 
-All commands below are written as if executed from the `demo` folder in the project repository, so make sure to clone the repository, switch into the demo folder and pull the latest docker images:
+All commands below are written as if executed from the `demo` folder in the project repository. Ensure you clone the repository, switch into the `demo` folder, and pull the latest Docker images:
 
 ```shell
 git clone [email protected]:input-output-hk/hydra.git
@@ -32,49 +31,50 @@ docker compose pull
 ```
 
 :::info Shortcut
-For convenience, we also provide a script `./run-docker.sh`, which combines all following steps. It also performs a few sanity checks to avoid tripping ourselves.
+For convenience, we provide a script `./run-docker.sh`, which combines all the following steps. It also performs a few sanity checks to prevent potential issues.
 :::
 
 ## Set up the devnet
 
-Next, we can run prepare the devnet configuration to bootstrap a local Cardano blockchain. Note that, we use a simple variant of Cardano that requires no stake pools whatsoever.
+Next, prepare the devnet configuration to bootstrap a local Cardano blockchain. 
+**Note** that we use a simplified variant of Cardano that does not require any stake pools.
 
 ```shell
 ./prepare-devnet.sh
 ```
 
-We can now bring the Cardano node up with:
+Bring the Cardano node up with:
 
 ```shell
 docker compose up -d cardano-node
 ```
 
-You can verify that the devnet is up-and-running by checking the logs with:
+Verify that the devnet is up-and-running by checking the logs with:
 ```shell
 docker compose logs cardano-node -f
 ```
 
 You should see traces containing `TraceAdoptedBlock`, which means that the devnet is producing blocks .. nice!
 
 :::info
-Don't wait too long between these two commands. If you get `TraceNoLedgerView` errors from the Cardano node, the genesis start time is too far in the past and you need to update them by running `prepare-devnet.sh` again.
+Do not wait too long between these two commands. If you get `TraceNoLedgerView` errors from the Cardano node, the genesis start time is too far in the past, and you need to update them by running `prepare-devnet.sh` again.
 :::
 
-Next we need to give Alice, Bob, and Carol some UTxOs to commit and some ADA to pay fees. We include a script `seed-devnet.sh` that uses the `cardano-cli` in the already running `cardano-node` container to do that:
+Next, we need to give Alice, Bob, and Carol some UTXOs for committing and ada for paying fees. To do this, use the `seed-devnet.sh` script, which uses the `cardano-cli` within the already running `cardano-node` container:
 
 ```shell
 ./seed-devnet.sh
 ```
 
 ## Start Hydra nodes
 
-Finally, now that the on-chain preparations are done, we can bring the Hydra network (all three nodes for Alice, Bob and Carol) up by running:
+Finally, now that the on-chain preparations are done, we can bring the Hydra network (all three nodes for Alice, Bob, and Carol) up by running:
 
 ```shell
 docker compose up -d hydra-node-{1,2,3}
 ```
 
-Using compose, you can start the demo Terminal-based User Interface (a.k.a. `hydra-tui`) to interact with Hydra nodes. There are 3 preconfigured TUI services in the compose definition: `hydra-tui-1`, `hydra-tui-2`, and `hydra-tui-3`. To connect to the first Hydra node in a terminal, run the following command:
+Using `compose`, you can start the demo Terminal-based User Interface (`hydra-tui`) to interact with Hydra nodes. There are three preconfigured TUI services in the `compose` definition: `hydra-tui-1`, `hydra-tui-2`, and `hydra-tui-3`. To connect to the first Hydra node in a terminal, run the following command:
 
 ```shell
 docker compose run hydra-tui-1
@@ -84,6 +84,6 @@ This will start a full-blown terminal interface loaded with signing keys corresp
 
 ## Use the head
 
-Using the terminal interface of any node, you can now `[i]nit` the Hydra head and `[c]ommit` pre-distributed funds to it. Note that these steps are near instant as the devnet is producing blocks much faster than a public testnet or the mainnet. After committing from all nodes, the head will automatically open and you can also use the `hydra-tui` or the API to create new transactions and submit them to the Hydra head.
+Using the terminal interface of any node, you can now `[i]nit` the Hydra head and `[c]ommit` pre-distributed funds to it. Note that these steps are near-instant as the devnet is producing blocks much faster than a public testnet or the mainnet. After committing from all nodes, the head will automatically open, and you can also use the `hydra-tui` or the API to create new transactions and submit them to the Hydra head.
 
-![](./open-head.png)
+![](./open-head.png)