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Expand Up @@ -8,19 +8,19 @@ newer processors. Do not try to install it on an i686 (Pentium Pro,
Celeron, Pentium-III) or lower processor, it simply will not work.

Since Zeppe-Lin is distributed in the form of a compiled tarball
containing a root filesystem, the installation requires a LiveCD with
any GNU/Linux.
containing a root filesystem, the installation requires a live
CD/DVD/USB with any GNU/Linux.

=head2 Install From RootFS Image

This chapter describes how to install Zeppe-Lin on the UEFI LUKS
partition and LVM volume group, so make sure you have the following
packages installed on your LiveCD: C<parted>, C<dosfstools>,
packages installed on your Live CD: C<parted>, C<dosfstools>,
C<cryptsetup> and C<lvm2>.

Let's go.

Boot from the LiveCD, open a terminal and get root privileges
Boot from the live CD/DVD/USB, open a terminal and get root privileges
(e.g. C<sudo su>).

=head3 B<Disk partitions and filesystems>
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As mentioned before, the C</mnt> directory is the default mountpoint
for our system. Let's download the rootfs into this directory so we
won't pollute LiveCD RAM:
won't pollute live CD/DVD/USB RAM:

# cd /mnt
# wget -c https://github.com/zeppe-lin/pkgsrc-core/releases/download/v0.99.1/rootfs-v0.99.1-x86_64.tar.xz{,.sig}
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(chrooted) # cp .config /boot/config-$KV
(chrooted) # make modules_install

You may still need to install the kernel non-free firmwares:
You may still need to install the kernel non-free firmware:

(chrooted) # pkgman install --deps linux-firmware

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B<pkgman> to sort by dependencies during update. This option must be
enabled since you need first to update B<openssl> for example, and
only then all dependent packages. The same for Perl, or Python, etc:
first update the interpretators and then the modules.
first update the interpreters and then the modules.

=head2 Binary Packages

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=head2 Package Management Frontend: pkgman
=head2 Package Management Front-end: pkgman

In its current form B<pkgutils> does not have a concept of dependency
handling. To address this, a front-end utility called B<pkgman>
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