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@@ -96109,7 +96109,7 @@ document.querySelector("button").addEventListener("click", bound);
    <li><p>If <var>script</var> is null, run <var>onComplete</var> given null, and return.</p></li>
 
    <li><p><span data-x="fetch the descendants of and link a module script">Fetch the descendants of
-   and link</span> <var>script</var>, given <var>settings object</var>, the destination "<code
+   and link</span> <var>script</var>, given <var>settings object</var>, "<code
    data-x="">script</code>", and <var>onComplete</var>.</p></li>
   </ol>
 
@@ -96180,7 +96180,7 @@ document.querySelector("button").addEventListener("click", bound);
   <p>This diagram illustrates how these algorithms relate to the ones above, as well as to each
   other:</p>
 
-  <svg id="module-script-fetching-diagram" viewBox="0 0 941 256" style="width: 80%; max-width: 1024px" role="img" aria-label="Fetch an external module script, fetch a modulepreload module script graph, fetch an inline module script graph, and fetch a module worker script graph all call fetch the descendants of and link a module script.">
+  <svg id="module-script-fetching-diagram" viewBox="0 0 941 166" style="width: 100%; max-width: 1024px" role="img" aria-label="Fetch an external module script, fetch a modulepreload module script graph, fetch an inline module script graph, and fetch a module worker script graph all call fetch the descendants of and link a module script.">
    <style>
    #module-script-fetching-diagram rect {
     stroke: black;
@@ -98683,13 +98683,13 @@ import "https://example.com/foo/../module2.mjs";</code></pre>
      script</span>.</p></li>
 
      <li>
-      <p>If none of the following conditions is true</p>
+      <p>If neither of the following conditions are true:</p>
 
       <ul class="brief">
-       <li><var>referrer</var> is a <span>Script Record</span></li>
+       <li><var>referrer</var> is a <span>Script Record</span>; or</li>
 
        <li><var>referrer</var> is a <span data-x="Cyclic Module Record">Module Record</span> and
-       <var>referrer</var>.[[Status]] is one of evaluating, evaluating-async or evaluated</li>
+       <var>referrer</var>.[[Status]] is one of evaluating, evaluating-async or evaluated,</li>
       </ul>
 
       <p>then set <var>fetch referrer</var> to <var>referrer</var>'s <span
@@ -98727,7 +98727,7 @@ import "https://example.com/foo/../module2.mjs";</code></pre>
     <p>If the previous step threw an exception, then:</p>
 
     <ol>
-     <li><p>Let <var>completion</var> be the <span>Completion Record</span> { [[Type]]: throw,
+     <li><p>Let <var>completion</var> be <span>Completion Record</span> { [[Type]]: throw,
      [[Value]]: <var>resolutionError</var>, [[Target]]: empty }.</p></li>
 
      <li><p>Perform <span>FinishLoadingImportedModule</span>(<var>referrer</var>,
@@ -98753,9 +98753,11 @@ import "https://example.com/foo/../module2.mjs";</code></pre>
     algorithm:</p>
 
     <ol>
-     <li><p>If <var>moduleScript</var> is null, then let <var>completion</var> be the
-     <span>Completion Record</span> { [[Type]]: throw, [[Value]]: a new <code>TypeError</code>,
-     [[Target]]: empty }.</p></li>
+     <li><p>Let <var>completion</var> be null.</p></li>
+
+     <li><p>If <var>moduleScript</var> is null, then set <var>completion</var> to <span>Completion
+     Record</span> { [[Type]]: throw, [[Value]]: a new <code>TypeError</code>, [[Target]]: empty
+     }.</p></li>
 
      <li>
       <p>Otherwise, if <var>moduleScript</var>'s <span data-x="concept-script-parse-error">parse
@@ -98765,15 +98767,15 @@ import "https://example.com/foo/../module2.mjs";</code></pre>
        <li><p>Let <var>parseError</var> be <var>moduleScript</var>'s <span
        data-x="concept-script-parse-error">parse error</span>.</p></li>
 
-       <li><p>Let <var>completion</var> be the <span>Completion Record</span> { [[Type]]: throw,
+       <li><p>Set <var>completion</var> to <span>Completion Record</span> { [[Type]]: throw,
        [[Value]]: <var>parseError</var>, [[Target]]: empty }.</p></li>
 
        <li><p>If <var>loadState</var> is not undefined and <var>loadState</var>.[[ParseError]] is
        null, set <var>loadState</var>.[[ParseError]] to <var>parseError</var>.</p></li>
       </ol>
      </li>
 
-     <li><p>Otherwise, let <var>completion</var> be the <span>Completion Record</span> { [[Type]]:
+     <li><p>Otherwise, set <var>completion</var> to <span>Completion Record</span> { [[Type]]:
      normal, [[Value]]: <var>result</var>'s <span data-x="concept-script-record">record</span>,
      [[Target]]: empty }.</p></li>