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stackabletech · Oct 5, 2023 · 3b17e7c · 3b17e7c
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diff --git a/docs/modules/hive/pages/usage-guide/operations/graceful-shutdown.adoc b/docs/modules/hive/pages/usage-guide/operations/graceful-shutdown.adoc
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 Graceful shutdown of Zookeeper nodes is either not supported by the product itself
 or we have not implemented it yet.
 
-The efforts of implementing graceful shutdown for all products that have this functionality is tracked in
+Outstanding implementation work for the graceful shutdowns of all products where this functionality is relevant is tracked in
 https://github.com/stackabletech/issues/issues/357
diff --git a/docs/modules/hive/pages/usage-guide/operations/index.adoc b/docs/modules/hive/pages/usage-guide/operations/index.adoc
@@ -2,4 +2,4 @@
 
 This section of the documentation is intended for the operations teams that maintain a Stackable Data Platform installation.
 
-Please read on the xref:concepts:operations/index.adoc[Concepts page on Operations] with the necessary details to operate the platform in a production environment.
+Please read the xref:concepts:operations/index.adoc[Concepts page on Operations] that contains the necessary details to operate the platform in a production environment.
diff --git a/docs/modules/hive/pages/usage-guide/operations/pod-disruptions.adoc b/docs/modules/hive/pages/usage-guide/operations/pod-disruptions.adoc
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 = Allowed Pod disruptions
 
-You can configure the allowed Pod disruptions for Hive nodes as described in xref:concepts:operations/pod_disruptions.adoc[].
+You can configure the permitted Pod disruptions for Hive nodes as described in xref:concepts:operations/pod_disruptions.adoc[].
 
 Unless you configure something else or disable our PodDisruptionBudgets (PDBs), we write the following PDBs: