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papers/blaine_mooers/main.md

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 First, we describe the contents of the snippet libraries and the kinds of problem they can solve.
 We group the libraries into several categories to simplify their explanation.
-Second, we describe the deployment of the snippet libraries for the automated speech recognition (ASR) software package Voice In Plus.
+Second, we describe the deployment of the snippet libraries for Voice In Plus (VIP), a automated speech recognition plugin for the web browsers Google Chrome and Microsoft Edge.
+The Voice In Plus plugin has a gentle learning curve.
+The plugin requires an Internet connection to run.
 The results section that follows describes the libraries in the same order.
 
-The Voice In Plus software runs only in the Web browser, but is the easiest to customize and has the gentlest learning curve.
-The first package requires an Internet connection to run, and the second package can be switched from using a local language model to one of three servers.
-The user can choose the desired server.
-
 ### Composition of the libraries
 
 We describe the libraries that we have developed to facilitate our own workflows.
@@ -209,7 +207,7 @@ The latter can be saved to keep a record of one's performance on a quiz.
 
 :::{figure} ./images/quiz.png
 :label: fig:quiz
-:width: 70 %
+:width: 70%
 An example of an interactive session with a quiz in a Jupyter notebook.
 :::
 
@@ -284,7 +282,7 @@ Obviously, the internal double quotes have to be replaced with single groups; ot
 
 :::{figure} ./images/VoiceInNewSentence.png
 :label: fig:newSentence
-:width: 70 %
+:width: 70%
 Entering a single voice trigger and the corresponding command in Voice In Plus.
 :::
 
@@ -417,7 +415,7 @@ We think that the productivity gains out wiegh the disruptions caused by these a
 ### Common hazards when voice computing
 
 In my year of using voice control every day, I have encountered two kinds of  mishaps.
-First, I haveI accidentally recorded a conversation when someone walked into my office while doing computing.
+First, I have accidentally recorded a conversation when someone walked into my office while doing computing.
 If I fail to turn off the ASR software, bits of our conversation are recorded at the positon of the mouse cursor.
 This inserted text has to be deleted later.
 This is a bigger problem when a code file or code cell is being edited.