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ofirdagan
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Feb 7, 2022
| let editMode = false; | ||
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| function getNewID(){ | ||
| return Math.floor(Math.random()*1000) |
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not good enough. the probability of getting the same id is 1/1000 which is pretty high. why didn't u take the guid generation function?
function uuidv4() {
return ([1e7]+-1e3+-4e3+-8e3+-1e11).replace(/[018]/g, c =>
(c ^ crypto.getRandomValues(new Uint8Array(1))[0] & 15 >> c / 4).toString(16)
);
}
| return Math.floor(Math.random()*1000) | ||
| } | ||
| function addItem(){ | ||
| let title = document.getElementById('title-input').value |
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the default should be always const unless your'e going to change either the pointer or if it's a primitive its value.
change all let to const unless u have to use let
| let itemElement = createTodoItemElement(id,title,content) | ||
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| list.appendChild(itemElement) | ||
| // now save to local storage |
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| list.appendChild(itemElement) | ||
| // now save to local storage | ||
| let itemString = `title: ${title};content: ${content}` |
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line 24+25 should be in its own function
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| // reset menu display | ||
| clearMenu() | ||
| document.getElementById('menu-button').innerText = 'add item' |
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where's the shortcut for document.getElementById(X).value?
| </div> | ||
| <div class='menu-buttons'> | ||
| <button id='clear-button' class='clear-button'>clear</button> | ||
| <button id='menu-button' class='menu-button'>add item</button> |
| // load display todo items from local storage | ||
| let list = document.getElementById('list') | ||
| for (let key in localStorage) { | ||
| if(isNaN(Number(key))) |
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what's that? what failed so u had to add this condition?
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