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@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ This session focused on reports of censorship as observed during recent years in
 
 The censorship reports, with a focus on Asia, and specifically India, as well as Russia, as an example where censorship changes significantly recently, discussed the legal frameworks and court acts that put legal obligation on regional network providers to block traffic and also measurements to validate the blocking as well as analyses how blocking is implemented, i.e. which protocols are used but also which kind of devices are used to configure the blocking rules and where are they deployed.
 
-Further, the possibility and prevalence for using VPNs for circumvention has been discussed including user expectation and an analysis of security short-comings of commercial VPN services. This analysis has shown various problems that lead to data leaks, not uploading user expectations especially when used in authoritarian regimes for censorship circumvention or private communication.
+Further, the possibility and prevalence for using VPNs for circumvention has been discussed including user expectation and an analysis of security short-comings of commercial VPN services. This analysis has shown various problems that lead to data leaks, not upholding user expectations especially when used in authoritarian regimes for censorship circumvention or private communication.
 
 ## Conclusions