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4 changes: 2 additions & 2 deletions tutorials.rst
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Expand Up @@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ At every step of a tutorial, the user experiences a moment of anxiety: will this

Keep up a narrative of expectations: "You will notice that ..."; "After a few moments, the server responds with ...". Show the user actual example output, or even the exact expected output.

If you know know in advance what the likely signs of going wrong are, consider flagging them: "If the output doesn't show ..., you have probably forgotten to ...".
If you know in advance what the likely signs of going wrong are, consider flagging them: "If the output doesn't show ..., you have probably forgotten to ...".

It's helpful to prepare the user for possibly surprising actions: "The command will probably return several hundred lines of logs in your terminal."

Expand Down Expand Up @@ -254,4 +254,4 @@ Meanwhile, the cooking lesson might be framed around the idea of learning how to

The child learns all this by working alongside you in the kitchen; in its own time, at its own pace, **through the activities** you do together, and not from the things you say or show.

With a young child, you will often find that the lesson suddenly has to end before you'd completed what you set out to do. This is normal and expected; children have short attention spans. But as long as the child managed to achieve something - however small - and enjoyed doing it, it will have laid down something in the construction of its technical expertise, that can be returned to and built upon next time.
With a young child, you will often find that the lesson suddenly has to end before you'd completed what you set out to do. This is normal and expected; children have short attention spans. But as long as the child managed to achieve something - however small - and enjoyed doing it, it will have laid down something in the construction of its technical expertise, that can be returned to and built upon next time.