diff --git a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/raspberry-pi/boot-eeprom.adoc b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/raspberry-pi/boot-eeprom.adoc
index 28e312b08..0e27031dc 100644
--- a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/raspberry-pi/boot-eeprom.adoc
+++ b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/raspberry-pi/boot-eeprom.adoc
@@ -75,14 +75,14 @@ First, ensure that your Raspberry Pi runs the latest software. Run the following
 $ sudo apt update && sudo apt full-upgrade
 ----
 
-Run the following command to start `raspi-config`.
+Next, run the following command to open `raspi-config`:
 
 [source,console]
 ----
 $ sudo raspi-config
 ----
 
-Navigate to `Advanced Options` and then `Bootloader Version`. Select `Latest` and choose `Yes` to confirm. Select `Finish` and confirm you want to reboot.
+Navigate to `Advanced Options` > `Bootloader Version`. Select `Latest`, then choose `Yes` to confirm. Select `Finish` and confirm that you want to reboot.
 
 If you run `sudo rpi-eeprom-update`, you should see that a more recent version of the bootloader is available and it's the `latest` release.
 
@@ -277,7 +277,7 @@ For more information, see xref:raspberry-pi.adoc#eeprom-boot-flow[EEPROM bootflo
 | Bootloader EEPROM image
 
 | `pieeprom.bin`
-| Bootloader EEPROM image - same as pieeprom.upd but changes recovery.bin behaviour to not rename itself to `RECOVERY.000`.
+| Bootloader EEPROM image - same as `pieeprom.upd` but changes `recovery.bin` behaviour to not rename itself to `RECOVERY.000`.
 
 | `pieeprom.sig`
 | The sha256 checksum of bootloader image (pieeprom.upd/pieeprom.bin)
diff --git a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/raspberry-pi/boot-nvme.adoc b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/raspberry-pi/boot-nvme.adoc
index 02b0db361..5660e7565 100644
--- a/documentation/asciidoc/computers/raspberry-pi/boot-nvme.adoc
+++ b/documentation/asciidoc/computers/raspberry-pi/boot-nvme.adoc
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 == NVMe SSD boot
 
-NVMe (Non-Volatile Memory express) is a standard for external storage access over a PCIe bus. You can connect NVMe drives via the PCIe slot on a Compute Module 4 (CM4) IO board, Raspberry Pi 5. With some additional configuration, you can boot from an NVMe drive.
+NVMe (Non-Volatile Memory express) is a standard for external storage access over a PCIe bus. You can connect NVMe drives via the PCIe slot on a IO Boards since Compute Module 4 and or Raspberry Pi 5 using an M.2 HAT+. With some additional configuration, you can boot from an NVMe drive.
 
 === Prerequisites
 
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Use the Raspberry Pi Configuration CLI to update the bootloader:
 $ sudo raspi-config
 ----
 
-Under `Advanced Options` > `Bootloader Order` and choose whether the bootloader should attempt to boot from `SD` or `NVMe` first:
+Under `Advanced Options` > `Bootloader Order`, specify that the bootloader should attempt to boot from `NVMe` first:
 
 [source,console]
 ----