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Hello @scottkleinman and @historical-theology, You can find the key files here:
You can review a preview of the lesson here: I noticed a couple things when setting this file up, which I've listed below:
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Hello Corey @historical-theology, I've sent you an invitation to join us as Outside Collaborators here on GitHub. This will give you the Write access you'll need to edit your lesson directly. (There's no need to use the Git Pull Request system in our ph-submissions repository). What's happening now?Your lesson has been moved to the next phase of our workflow which is Phase 2: Initial Edit. In this Phase, your editor Scott @scottkleinman will read your lesson, and provide some initial feedback. Scott will post feedback and suggestions as a comment in this Issue, so that you can revise your draft in the following Phase 3: Revision 1. %%{init: { 'logLevel': 'debug', 'theme': 'dark', 'themeVariables': {
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Section Phase 1 <br> Submission
Who worked on this? : Publishing Assistant (@charlottejmc)
All Phase 1 tasks completed? : Yes
Section Phase 2 <br> Initial Edit
Who's working on this? : Editor (@scottkleinman)
Expected completion date? : May 5
Section Phase 3 <br> Revision 1
Who's responsible? : Author (@historical-theology)
Expected timeframe? : ~30 days after feedback is received
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Hello, Corey @historical-theology Here are some initial comments on your tutorial.
Could you please address these issues in a revision before I send the tutorial out to external reviewers? And, of course, let me know if you have any questions. |
What's happening now?Hello Corey @historical-theology. Your lesson has been moved to the next phase of our workflow which is Phase 3: Revision 1. This Phase is an opportunity for you to revise your draft in response to @scottkleinman's initial feedback. You can make direct commits to your file here: /en/drafts/originals/teach-history-and-languages-with-strategy-game.md. @charlottejmc or I can help if you encounter any practical problems! When you and Scott are both happy with the revised draft, we will move forward to Phase 4: Open Peer Review. %%{init: { 'logLevel': 'debug', 'theme': 'dark', 'themeVariables': {
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Section Phase 2 <br> Initial Edit
Who worked on this? : Editor (@scottkleinman)
All Phase 1 tasks completed? : Yes
Section Phase 3 <br> Revision 1
Who's working on this? : Author (@historical-theology)
Expected completion date? : May 8
Section Phase 4 <br> Open Peer Review
Who's responsible? : Reviewers (TBC)
Expected timeframe? : ~60 days after request is accepted
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Revision based on the feedback of @anisa-hawes and @scottkleinman in #613
@anisa-hawes , @charlottejmc , and @hawc2 , thank you for configuring all of this for us, and @scottkleinman , thank you for your thoughtful, extensive feedback. I have prepared a thorough revision (ec83e84) in which I have aimed to take seriously everything mentioned thus far in this issue thread. While preparing the revision, I also have made a number of smaller changes throughout the piece to improve its clarity.
The adjustments look satisfactory. I am concerned about legibility at the reduced resolutions, but I also think that readers following the body text will not struggle to know what is being depicted in the images.
I have expanded the alternative text for every image with greater specificity. Please let me know if the updated alternative texts suffice (and, if not, how they might be improved further). Also, feel free to make direct commits to improve their functional utility for potential readers who might be unable to view the images.
I have overhauled Tutorial Overview to include nearly all of these things. In the process, I have used your encouragement to write a "short narrative" as a way to create a kind of orienting hook or lead-in for the reader.
I have moved all of these things to the endnotes.
I have reworked this part of the Requirements section.
I have overhauled the section entitled "A Scholarship-aware Community Endeavor," partly by combining it with the previous "Team Building" section and condensing the result.
It is standard practice for what are often colloquially referred to as "computer players" or "bots" to be labeled formally as artificial intelligence (AI) units/players. Is there something specific that ought to be clarified within the tutorial about this? If not, and I have answered your question, I am comfortable leaving those references to AI as they are.
I have removed all instances in which GIMP is framed as a requirement, instead noting specifically that the reader may use the image editing software of his/her choice. At the same time, I have left in-place the detailed steps in GIMP for the benefit of persons without any background in digital image editing, since performing those digital image editing steps is necessary for successful topographic image importation in Atlas for 0 A.D.
The attention to detail that you have shown, @scottkleinman , is laudable, and I appreciate it. Thus far, I have appreciated how straightforward this GitHub-based approach is for the Programming Historian. While I hope that you will find this revision to be ready to be issued to external reviewers, I will be happy to fulfill any follow-up request(s) for revision that you might have. @historical-theology Corey Stephan, Ph.D. |
Thanks for getting back to me @historical-theology. I agree that we should leave the images as they are, to ensure legibility. Thank you very much for your work on the alt-text – I've made some minor edits, but overall it looks great! |
Thank you, Corey @historical-theology. We really appreciate your work on this first round of revisions. Scott @scottkleinman will aim to review your changes within the next fortnight by ~May 31st. After that, we'll confirm the next steps. |
@historical-theology, I am just emerging from the end-of-semester crush and finally able to have a look your revisions. They look good. One thing that has been lost, as far as I can tell, is a download link for GIMP, which still seems useful despite GIMP's not being a "requirement". So this is just a note to put that in before we publish. That said, I think we are ready to present the tutorial to peer reviewers. I'll start on this next week. |
Hello Corey @historical-theology, What's happening now?Your lesson has been moved to the next phase of our workflow which is Phase 4: Open Peer Review. This phase will be an opportunity for you to hear feedback from peers in the community. Caio @caiocmello has invited two reviewers to read your lesson, test your code, and provide constructive feedback. In the spirit of openness, reviews will be posted as comments in this issue (unless you specifically request a closed review). After both reviews, Caio will summarise the suggestions to clarify your priorities in Phase 5: Revision 2. %%{init: { 'logLevel': 'debug', 'theme': 'dark', 'themeVariables': {
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Section Phase 3 <br> Revision 1
Who worked on this? : Author (@historical-theology)
All Phase 3 tasks completed? : Yes
Section Phase 4 <br> Open Peer Review
Who's working on this? : Reviewers (@adamlporter + @clauper-maker)
Expected completion date? : 22 Nov // 30 Nov
Section Phase 5 <br> Revision 2
Who's responsible? : Author (@historical-theology)
Expected timeframe? : ~30 days after editor's summary
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Hello Corey @historical-theology, Caio Mello @caiocmello will now be taking on editorial responsibilities for this lesson. Caio's first step will be inviting two community peer reviewers to contribute their feedback. Caio will post an update here in the Issue when the reviewers' names are confirmed. I would like to take this opportunity to apologise for the extended delay, and thank you for your patience. Alex @hawc2 will be in touch with you by email in the coming days. With very best wishes, |
Hello Corey @historical-theology, What's happening now?Your lesson has been moved to the next phase of our workflow which is Phase 6: Sustainability + Accessibility. In this phase, our publishing team will coordinate a series of tasks including: copyediting, typesetting, generating archival links, collating copyright agreements, and reviewing essential metadata.
When our Sustainability + Accessibility actions are complete, the Managing Editor @hawc2 will read the lesson/translation through one final time ahead of publication. %%{init: { 'logLevel': 'debug', 'theme': 'dark', 'themeVariables': {
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Section Phase 5 <br> Second Revision
Who worked on this? : Author (@historical-theology)
All Phase 5 tasks completed? : Yes
Section Phase 6 <br> Sustainability + Accessibility
Who's working on this? : Publishing Team
Expected completion date? : 24 April
Section Phase 7 <br> Publication
Who's responsible? : Managing Editor @hawc2
Expected timeframe? : ~10 days
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Hello @historical-theology, This lesson is now with me for copyediting. I aim to complete the work by ~24 April. Please note that you won't have direct access to make further edits to your files during this phase. Any further revisions can be discussed with your editor @caiocmello after copyedits are complete. Thank you for your understanding. |
Hello @historical-theology and @caiocmello, I've prepared a PR with the copyedits for your review. There, you'll be able to review the 'rich-diff' to see my edits in detail. You'll also find brief instructions for how to reply to any questions or comments which came up during the copyedit. When you're both happy, we can merge in the PR. |
Dear @historical-theology, I just want to check that you've noticed the copyedits to your lesson are now ready for your review? If you have any questions about how to proceed, please don't hesitate to ask. |
@charlottejmc , thank you for the fine copyediting work. Of the 5 interventions that you requested of me, I completed (and closed) 3, and 2 remain -- simply because (as you will see in the copyediting thread) I requested that you change the document to have the drop-in replacement screenshots that I made. After you have done that, will you please mention (ping) me in this thread so that I know that I should do a final close reading of the document in that copyedited state? Thanks, |
P.S. Something happened with the sequence of the images in the live preview; they are not appearing in the order in which they are supposed to appear. I suspect that it simply has to do with the copyediting commits not being finalized, but I wanted to make sure to draw it to your attention. |
Thank you, Corey @historical-theology. Charlotte is away this week, but if you could email me (admin[@]programminghistorian.org) the two images, I can process them and make the replacements (we aren't able to receive the local files you've shared via your comments). When we have merged in the copyedits, we can carefully re-check the order of all figures to ensure everything is in the right place. At the moment, the Preview reflects the lesson pre-copyedit. |
@anisa-hawes , thank you. @charlottejmc actually responded to me in the copyediting thread. |
Thank you @historical-theology, I've replaced the two images now. I'll proceed with typesetting, and then I'll get back to you with a few final metadata questions to prepare the lesson for publication. Thank you for your patience! |
Hello @hawc2 , This lesson's sustainability + accessibility checks are in progress.
Publisher's sustainability + accessibility actions:
Authorial / editorial input to YAML:
Files we are preparing for transfer to Jekyll:
Promotion:
Publisher's post-publication tasks:
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@charlottejmc , thank you for your attentive work. Here is my input on the remaining authorial checklist:
The editorial team and I collectively agreed on 2 (Intermediate) earlier in this thread. That should not need to change, so I checked the box for you above.
I think that "presenting" as synonymous with "teaching" is the appropriate choice, unless we wish to go with "acquiring" as synonymous with "learning." Feel free to select either, in keeping with PH's norms.
After looking through the official list of topic categories that you hyperlinked, I think that a new 'grand' or 'master' category might be in order. Perhaps "teaching" or "teaching-and-learning" would suit not only this PH tutorial but future tutorials, as well. My specific proposal, then, is a new topic category for PH called "teaching-and-learning." If it should be more convenient for you to use a pre-existing category, then "creative-coding" would seem to be the best match overall. I would not object to any of the above options -- nor to anything similar. Please feel free to select one.
Since this is PH's first lesson specifically about a classroom context, and it is specifically about ancient history, I suggest that we use the famous 1st century BCE mosaic of Plato's Academy from Pompeii, which is available as a high quality facsimile in multiple formats in the Wikimedia Commons (as part of the public domain). If you agree with this selection, then please feel free to add the image wherever it is needed (or direct me to how I ought to add it myself).
Here is my slightly reworked version of the official description from the Wikimedia Commons:
If you agree with this alt text, then please add it wherever it is needed (or direct me to how I ought to add it myself).
If that looks correct, then please add it wherever it is needed (or direct me to how I ought to add it myself). |
Hello @historical-theology, Thank you very much for your responses. If you don't mind, I'll go over them with you below:
We haven't made this very clear, but these verbs correspond to what researchers do to data (acquire it, transform it, present it, analyse it, etc.). In this lesson's case, I feel that the bulk of the practical steps focus on transforming data (topological maps, background knowledge about a civilisation, etc.) in order to create the playable scenario. Does that make sense in your opinion?
In a way, all of our lessons are already 'teaching-and-learning' lessons, because they are equally used by instructors in their classes and by self-learners (whether at student or teacher level). While this lesson is certainly written through a very explicit pedagogical lens, I think the core concepts are more about how to set up a playable scenario which facilitates history and language learning, whether in a classroom setting or for personal use. I certainly agree with What do you think?
We'd be happy to use this great avatar, thank you for providing it – although I would like to kindly point out that many of our lessons are written for a classroom context, too! It is one of the key ways in which researchers engage with our content.
Thank you Corey. I'll rework it a little bit, because the objective of the alt-text is rather to give an overview of the visual content of an image. How about: 'Ancient Roman mosaic depicting several men in togas learning under a tree.' If you're happy with everything above, I will take care of setting it up! Thank you very much for your input. The last box to tick is your copyright agreement, which you can fill out in any way you prefer and send to me via email: publishing.assistant [@] programminghistorian.org. Thank you! ✨ |
@charlottejmc , thank you again for your attentiveness. First, at this point, I have lost track of where I ought to enter new information, since there is both a copyediting document and an official draft document (if not a third open place). I humbly ask that either you enter these items into the correct location or direct me to the specific place in which I ought to do so myself. Second, I note that I have just sent a signed copy of the copyright agreement document to you by email (to publishing.assistant@). Now, here are my follow-up responses to the 3 remaining items on the checklist:
Yes. Let us use
Yes. Let us use both
That works. Thank you. |
Dear @historical-theology, don't worry – in this phase, the publishing team (Anisa and I) take care of entering all the final information on our side, so you don't need to do anything more than exchange with us in the comments! If it can help, below are all your lesson's active files:
You can read (but not edit) the preview of your lesson here: Thank you for providing the copyright agreement and for agreeing the outstanding elements of metadata, which I've set up now. |
Hello Corey @historical-theology, What's happening now?Your lesson has been moved to the final phase of our workflow which is Phase 7: Publication. In this phase, I will prepare and stage the lesson files for the Managing Editor Alex @hawc2 to review them one last time and provide any final feedback or suggest additional revisions. When Alex agrees that the lesson is ready, it will be published on the Programming Historian website and we will announce it here. %%{init: { 'logLevel': 'debug', 'theme': 'dark', 'themeVariables': {
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Section Phase 6 <br> Sustainability + Accessibility
Who worked on this? : Publishing Team
All Phase 6 tasks completed? : Yes
Section Phase 7 <br> Publication
Who's working on this? : Managing Editor @hawc2 & Publishing Manager @anisa-hawes
Expected timeframe? : ~10 days
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Dear Corey @historical-theology and @caiocmello, I hope you're both well? I’ve staged Alex @hawc2 has done his final read and advised upon some small changes, which I have implemented programminghistorian/jekyll@1fb6ec1. You will note that one of the things we have changed is to replace the 0 (zero) in 0 A.D. with an html code ( Charlotte also re-read the lesson and raised a question: could it be useful to define BCE and CE ('Before Common Era' and 'Common Era')? As this is a complex lesson, Alex suggested giving you both an opportunity to read it one more time before publication. Please let us know what you think, either here in the issue thread, or in PR #3560 where we are collaborating on the final preparations ✨ With our thanks for all the energy and thought you have given to this lesson, |
Thank you for this note. I issued a detailed response in the PR (editorial) thread. That should be one of my last communications on this piece, so please let me reiterate now my deepest gratitude to you and your colleagues for your hard work. Corey |
Thank you, Corey @historical-theology. I'm grateful for your thorough read, and your thoughtful feedback. Thank you for your hard work - we have sincerely enjoyed collaborating with you. Anisa |
@anisa-hawes As an aside, this is a positive that you might not have considered previously -- Owing to the simple formatting of PH (based in Markdown) and the inclusion of carefully constructed alternative text for images (for which I thank you editors for your great assistance), the lesson preview looks lovely not only in the ultralight Netsurf GUI Web browser (with all images rendering correctly inside its independent Web engine) but even both the elinks and (especially) lynx CLI Web browsers in my terminal emulator (with no images at all -- text and hyperlinks only). This is important for accessibility in the broadest sense. In addition to the alternative text being for persons with vision impairment, persons with poor Web connections and/or older hardware can read PH lessons. Plus, persons like me who appreciate being able to read Web-based materials outside of full-size Web browsers for other reasons can do so with PH. |
Thank you, Corey @historical-theology. That is wonderful to learn. Yes, we are absolutely committed to making our lessons accessible to the broadest possible readership and we are working hard towards 'best' practice. As you say, this is about ensuring our resources are available to those with visual support needs, as well as those who work with different operating systems, slower internet connections, and varying computational resource. |
Hello everyone, I just wanted to say that I went once again through the lesson and I am very happy to see the result of this collaborative work. Many many thanks to Corey @historical-theology for your patience and dedication to write such an interesting lesson! Thanks also @anisa-hawes @hawc2 @charlottejmc @adamlporter @clauper-maker for the team work! |
Programming Historian in English has received a proposal for a lesson, 'Teaching History and Languages with a Strategy Computer Game: 0 A.D. in the Classroom' by @historical-theology.
I have circulated this proposal for feedback within the English team. We have considered this proposal for:
We are pleased to have invited @historical-theology to develop this Proposal into a Submission under the guidance of @scottkleinman as editor.
The Submission package should include:
@historical-theology has already shared their Submission package with our Publishing team by email, copying in @scottkleinman. Our Publishing team will now process the new lesson materials, and prepare a Preview of the initial draft. They will run any questions by the contributor and post a comment in this Issue to provide the locations of all key files, as well as a link to the Preview where contributors can read the lesson as the draft progresses.
Our dedicated Ombudspersons are Ian Milligan (English), Silvia Gutiérrez De la Torre (español), Hélène Huet (français), and Luis Ferla (português). Please feel free to contact them at any time if you have concerns that you would like addressed by an impartial observer. Contacting the ombudspersons will have no impact on the outcome of any peer review.
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