From 8e85b4710d32c9dd464a2154802afa3a3dfc62c1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: SebastianZimmeck <szimmeck@wesleyan.edu>
Date: Sun, 4 Feb 2024 12:53:01 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Clarify when a GPC preference needs to be conveyed (issue
 #66)

---
 index.html | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index c82d097..fc63107 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -177,7 +177,7 @@ <h2>Expressing a Do Not Sell Or Share Preference</h2>
         <h3>Expression Format</h3>
         <p>
           A Global Privacy Control [=preference=] needs to be conveyed to all mechanisms that might
-          collect data from or share data with third parties.
+          collect data from a person or share a person's data with third parties.
         </p>
         <p>
           If set, this [=preference=] is expressed as a single value of <code>1</code> or equivalently

From f0c7fc21358d47a7be8f09ccce3d636d8d68890d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: SebastianZimmeck <szimmeck@wesleyan.edu>
Date: Sun, 4 Feb 2024 20:38:00 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 2/2] Clarify per @pes10k's suggestion (issue #66)

---
 index.html | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index fc63107..2070180 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -176,8 +176,8 @@ <h2>Expressing a Do Not Sell Or Share Preference</h2>
       <section>
         <h3>Expression Format</h3>
         <p>
-          A Global Privacy Control [=preference=] needs to be conveyed to all mechanisms that might
-          collect data from a person or share a person's data with third parties.
+          A Global Privacy Control [=preference=] should be conveyed for all HTTP requests (in the form 
+          of the HTTP header) and all websites (in the form of the Web API property).
         </p>
         <p>
           If set, this [=preference=] is expressed as a single value of <code>1</code> or equivalently