[Web]: Consolidated web user feedback reporting Copy Edit

[stepmalt]

Platform
Oppia Web |

Describe the request
Take a look at the copy for this project from last year and make comments for suggested edits.

Link to PRD
(oppia/oppia#18383)
https://www.figma.com/file/PR5Da4ELZpJJqzUDcwrK8H/Oppia--Web-Platform-User-Feedback-Collection--V2?type=design&node-id=597-18154&mode=design

Information about deadlines/priorities
Sean requested this to be done by the 21st.

UPDATE (Sean): After analyzing the technical requirements for this project, we decided not to offer this for the 2024 GSoC, so I've downgraded the priority level to regular priority and the 21st deadline no longer applies. Thanks (and sorry about that)!

DESIGN APPROVAL CHECKLIST -- DO NOT EDIT.

• UX Design approved (Android mocks should include dark mode)
• UX Writing approved
• Design Systems approved
• Product approved

For a design project to be completed, it needs approval from UXD, UXW, DS and PM. Please tag the following reviewers when your project is ready (at least one reviewer for each of the 4 bullet points below):

• UXD: @rflore / @S4v8n (for Web projects)
• UXW: @stepmalt
• Design systems: @qluuu / @celestinetales
• PM: @seanlip

[stepmalt]

Hi @seanlip - this is the issue you told me to create and work on the UXW for. I have a quick question. What exactly do you want copy feedback on? I think it's probably the most relevant to leave copy feedback on the Desktop and Mobile Final Prototypes - but if you want critique on any other copy in this file, let me know!

[seanlip]

Hi @stepmalt -- it would be Final Prototypes (desktop + mobile) and Hi-Fi Mocks. Thanks for clarifying!

[seanlip]

Also @stepmalt just wanted to let you know that the deadline is more relaxed now since we decided not to offer this for GSoC this year (the technical requirements are a bit complicated since we need to figure out what to do with the existing feedback system too). So please feel free to take this at regular (instead of high) priority -- thanks!

[stepmalt]

@seanlip Thanks for the update!

[kmuir1991]

Got it. Thanks for letting us know @seanlip !

[tamiorendain]

Hi @seanlip, I've started leaving comments in the Figma file but wanted to ask - I find that many of my comments are repetitive across different flows as well as between desktop and mobile. Would it be helpful to copy my comments over and over when applicable? Or is there a better way to leave feedback?

[seanlip]

Hi @tamiorendain, great question ... I think you can either leave separate comments as you're currently doing, or leave single comments but say "please fix this in the other flows too, where applicable". Would that work?

[tamiorendain]

Hi @seanlip, if that works for the designers, then it works for me! :)

[tamiorendain]

Hi Team,

I've reviewed this file and made UXW comments, specifically on the Final Prototypes-Desktop/Mobile and Hi-fi Screens pages, as requested.

A lot of the comments overlapped between pages, but I tried to copy relevant comments onto the beginning of each page the first time I saw an error. Whenever I saw elements that needed the same edit following that first instance, I just wrote "Same comments as above". Let me know if you have any questions, but checking approval for now assuming nothing else needs to be checked on our end!