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   Applications for our 2025-26 course
   %strong Introduction to Political Technology
   are now open!
-%p The course is designed to support mid-career technologists develop a holistic understanding of the civic landscape in the UK, in order to found groundbreaking new projects or seek strategic positions in key institutions. It entails a commitment of approximately 16 hours per week and is designed to fit around a day job.
-%p The course has run since 2015 and has graduated 80 fellows. Originally it was fully residential with participants living in Newspeak House itself, but due to popular demand the course has grown and the majority of course participants now live off campus.
+%p The course is designed to support mid-career technologists develop a holistic understanding of the civic landscape in the UK, in order to found groundbreaking new projects or seek strategic positions in key institutions.
+%p The course has run since 2015 and has graduated 80 fellows. It entails a commitment of approximately 16 hours per week and is designed to fit around a day job, particularly if remote or flexible. Originally it was fully residential with participants living in Newspeak House itself, but due to popular demand the course has grown and the majority of course participants now live off campus.
 %p You will spend a year immersed in a wide range of communities working to change society with technology, including government, activism, charities, journalism, and research, and benefit from the expertise and guidance of our multi-disciplinary faculty.
 %p
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