update desc some more

Author: meldra

About/About.xml

@@ -13,9 +13,8 @@ If you're bored of psychopathic cannibal slave trading colonies, how about going
 
 This mod introduces the vegan and vegetarian traits to drive you up the wall and around the bend with their picky eating and their protests about wearing dead animals.
 
-The less dedicated vegetarians will just complain about eating meat and will refuse to go hunting. Slaughter, butchery and touching meat or dead animals will make them rather unhappy.
 
-The vegans however will, in addition to the above, protest eating or wearing animal products. They will also refuse to even partake in animal handling as the job involves slaughtering and they think training animals for work or defense is exploitation.
+The vegans however will, in addition to the above, protest eating or wearing animal products. They will also refuse to even partake in animal handling as the job involves slaughtering and they think training animals for work or defense is exploitation. Butchery and touching meat or dead animals will make them rather unhappy.
 
 Neither trait is incapable of violence, but will be upset if that violence hurts an animal.