Improving mdm

Author: maxfierrog

content/resume.md

@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ Berkeley, CA -- Feb 2024 to Nov 2024
 
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-After leading the Endpoint Engineering team for about 2 years, I transitioned to a Senior role to enjoy additional time for pursuing my research interests. I focused on supporting my team in additional onboarding as well as other ongoing efforts, such as improving our implementation of mobile device management.
+After leading the Endpoint Engineering team for about 2 years, I transitioned to a Senior role to enjoy additional time for pursuing my research interests. I focused on supporting my team with additional onboarding in addition to other efforts, such as improving mobile device management.
 
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public/resume/index.html

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-  <p>After leading the Endpoint Engineering team for about 2 years, I transitioned to a Senior role to enjoy additional time for pursuing my research interests. I focused on supporting my team in additional onboarding as well as other ongoing efforts, such as improving our implementation of mobile device management.</p>
+  <p>After leading the Endpoint Engineering team for about 2 years, I transitioned to a Senior role to enjoy additional time for pursuing my research interests. I focused on supporting my team with additional onboarding in addition to other efforts, such as improving mobile device management.</p>
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