You signed in with another tab or window. Reload to refresh your session.You signed out in another tab or window. Reload to refresh your session.You switched accounts on another tab or window. Reload to refresh your session.Dismiss alert
I recently fell in love with InertiaJS and therefore, I'd love to help the project grow.
So in the world of sales copywriting, the headline on your page is the most important part EVER!
Because if your headline isn't good, then none will continue to read the rest of your page.
The current headline "Build single-page apps, without building an API." is decent, but it should pack a way bigger punch.
So here's the one I came up with that you can use:
"Are You Tired Of Spending Days Writing Over-Complicated APIs? Meet InertiaJS"
The reason why this one is so powerful is because it mentions the problem and then provides a solution which is InertiaJS.
Your sub-headline is great so I wouldn't change that for now.
Now lastly, I would at least add 3-5 benefit bullet points underneath the headline section. explaining the cool benefits the reader gets with using InertiaJS.
Let me know what you think of this and if you want some more help, feel free to reach out to me (my email is on my GitHub page.)
The text was updated successfully, but these errors were encountered:
I recently fell in love with InertiaJS and therefore, I'd love to help the project grow.
So in the world of sales copywriting, the headline on your page is the most important part EVER!
Because if your headline isn't good, then none will continue to read the rest of your page.
The current headline "Build single-page apps, without building an API." is decent, but it should pack a way bigger punch.
So here's the one I came up with that you can use:
"Are You Tired Of Spending Days Writing Over-Complicated APIs? Meet InertiaJS"
The reason why this one is so powerful is because it mentions the problem and then provides a solution which is InertiaJS.
Your sub-headline is great so I wouldn't change that for now.
Now lastly, I would at least add 3-5 benefit bullet points underneath the headline section. explaining the cool benefits the reader gets with using InertiaJS.
Let me know what you think of this and if you want some more help, feel free to reach out to me (my email is on my GitHub page.)
The text was updated successfully, but these errors were encountered: