final corrections

Author: mjuchli

personal_reports.tex

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 \chapter{Personal Reports}
 
 \section*{Report: Marc Juchli}
+
 As messaging never was a main part of my studies, I initially could not
 directly imagine what processes are hidden behind a messaging system, nor the
 steps it would take to build such a system from scratch.  During the prestudy it
 turned out that I let myself into a subject which will soon become one of the
-most interesting things I've discovered at HSR. Combined with the functional
+most interesting things I have discovered at HSR. Combined with the functional
 programming language Haskell, which I was already confronted with in my semester
 abroad, I became even more interested in this thesis. The combination of
 constant research and direct implementation was a very interesting challenge.
@@ -26,6 +27,10 @@ \section*{Report: Marc Juchli}
 knowledge and approaches I learnt during the work with Haskell is what I
 treasure most.
 
+First contributions to this project have already been done by the Haskell
+community and I am certain that with further efforts the HMB project could grow
+into a sustainable and state-of-the-art message broker.
+
 I am looking forward to hopefully be able to continue working on this subject
 during my master studies.