diff --git a/src/thesis/2-reproducibility.typ b/src/thesis/2-reproducibility.typ
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--- a/src/thesis/2-reproducibility.typ
+++ b/src/thesis/2-reproducibility.typ
@@ -1553,8 +1553,9 @@ potential for reproducibility at run-time.
   functionality needs.
 ]
 
-Package managers are a critical aspect of the reproducibility puzzle. Without
-proper control over how dependencies are resolved and installed, achieving
+Package managers are a critical aspect of the reproducibility puzzle since they
+can manage the state of a software environment. Without proper control over how
+software and their dependencies are resolved and installed, achieving
 consistent and reproducible builds becomes difficult​.
 
 === Sources Of Non-Determinism