feedback from a friend

[amgando]

• Lots of text right away! Unlikely that people will read it.
• Great to lead with recognizable brands as clients
• The quotes from students are great. I'd remove "student at an immersive bootcamp" since it's the same on every one and bold the keywords in each testimonial so people can scan them.
  "courses" takes a bit of time to grok. Are these courses you've taken? Or courses you've created? That you are offering now? When I read more I can see that these are courses you've designed, but it would be better if the headline made that clear immediately.
• Also, the look of the courses makes me feel like I should be able to click to learn more, but I can't.
• For "clients" and "teaching", the subtext feels disconnected from the headline.