diff --git a/aip/general/0121.md b/aip/general/0121.md
index d8c1a68ac..eb7f4cf3f 100644
--- a/aip/general/0121.md
+++ b/aip/general/0121.md
@@ -102,11 +102,11 @@ mean that the state of the resource's existence and all user-settable values
 have reached a steady-state.
 
 [output only][] values unrelated to the resource [state][] **should** also have
-reached a steady-state. for values that are related to the resource [state][].
+reached a steady-state. 
 
-Examples include:
+For values that are related to the resource [state][], examples include:
 
-- Following a successful create that is is latest mutation on a resource, a get
+- Following a successful create that is the latest mutation on a resource, a get
   request for a resource **must** return the resource.
 - Following a successful update that is the latest mutation on a resource, a get
   request for a resource **must** return the final values from the update
@@ -187,4 +187,4 @@ and in turn do not increase resource management complexity.
 - **2022-12-19**: Added a section requiring Get and List.
 - **2022-11-02**: Added a section restricting resource references.
 - **2019-08-01**: Changed the examples from "shelves" to "publishers", to
-  present a better example of resource ownership.
\ No newline at end of file
+  present a better example of resource ownership.