Update README.md

Author: stevebauman

README.md

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-ActiveRedis uses Redis hashes to store and retrieve model data.
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-This provides a simple and efficient way to interact with Redis in Laravel, as you would with Eloquent models.
+ActiveRedis provides you simple and efficient way to interact with Redis hashes using an Eloquent-like API.
 
 ## Index