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doc/manual/source/release-notes-determinate/changes.md

@@ -149,4 +149,3 @@ This section lists the differences between upstream Nix 2.31 and Determinate Nix
 
 <!-- Determinate Nix version 3.10.1 -->
 
-* Sync with 2.31.1 by @edolstra in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#189](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/189)

doc/manual/source/release-notes-determinate/v3.10.1.md

@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 * Based on [upstream Nix 2.31.1](../release-notes/rl-2.31.md).
 
 ## What's Changed
-* Sync with 2.31.1 by @edolstra in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#189](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/189)
+This release rebases Determinate Nix on upstream Nix 2.31.1.
 
 
 **Full Changelog**: [v3.10.0...v3.10.1](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/compare/v3.10.0...v3.10.1)