diff --git a/build/README.md.src b/build/README.md.src
index 740e900..cbf395c 100644
--- a/build/README.md.src
+++ b/build/README.md.src
@@ -16,16 +16,16 @@ Feel free to create a new chapter and submit a PR!
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 ## How to... !heading
-### Define Version, Release, etc. in another file, environment variable, etc. !heading
-This is shown in most chapters, including [Importing a Pre-Existing File Tree](#importing-a-pre-existing-file-tree).
+### Define key parameters elsewhere !heading
+The techniques to define Version, Release, etc. in another file, environment variable, etc. are shown in most chapters, including [Importing a Pre-Existing File Tree](#importing-a-pre-existing-file-tree). As an alternative to using the `rpmbuild` command line's `--define` option, you can also pre-process the specfile using `sed`, `autotools`, etc. I've seen them all and done them all for various reasons.
 
-### Call `rpmbuild` from a `Makefile` !heading
+### Call rpmbuild from a Makefile !heading
 This is shown in most chapters, including [Git Branch or Tag in Release](#git-branch-or-tag-in-release).
 
 ### Disable debug packaging !heading
 While **not recommended**, because debug packages are very useful, this is shown in most chapters as well.
 
-### Include Jenkins (or Any CI) Job Number in Release !heading
+### Include Jenkins Job Number in Release !heading
 This is shown in the `git` chapter as [Jenkins Build Number in Release](#jenkins-build-number-in-release)
 
 ### Provide Older Versions of Libraries !heading
diff --git a/quick_tips/README.md b/quick_tips/README.md
index dace79f..caceaa5 100644
--- a/quick_tips/README.md
+++ b/quick_tips/README.md
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 ## Quick Tips !heading
 In reviewing some of the most highly voted answers on Stack Overflow, I decided to gather a few here that don't require a full example to explain:
 
-### Don't Put Single % In Comments !heading
-This happens [a](https://stackoverflow.com/a/14063974/836748) [*lot*](https://stackoverflow.com/a/18440679/836748). You need to double it with `%%`, or a multi-line macro will only have the first line commented out!
+### RPM Preprocessor is Really Dumb !heading
+**Don't** put single `%` in comments... this happens [a](https://stackoverflow.com/a/14063974/836748) [*lot*](https://stackoverflow.com/a/18440679/836748). You need to double it with `%%`, or a multi-line macro will only have the first line commented out! Newer versions of `rpmbuild` will _at least_ warn you now.
 
 ### Extract All Files !heading
 Use `rpm2cpio` with `cpio`. This will extract all files treating the current directory as `/`:
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ $ rpm2cpio package-3.8.3.rpm | cpio -iv --to-stdout ./usr/share/doc/package-3.8.
 2173 blocks
 ```
 
-### Change (or No) Compression !heading
+### Change Compression or No Compression !heading
 As noted [here](https://stackoverflow.com/a/10255406/836748):
 ```rpm-spec
 %define _source_payload w0.gzdio