wip: small typos / rewording

Author: agoose77

content/blog/2025/jupyter-book-cors/index.md

@@ -36,11 +36,11 @@ So, we realized that we needed to make an **upstream contribution in JupyterHub*
 - https://github.com/jupyterhub/binderhub/pull/1906 enables this workflow on a BinderHub so that its services can be discovered.
 - https://github.com/jupyter-book/myst-theme/pull/503 adds new launch button functionality to [Jupyter Book 2][jb2] that allows readers to bring their own Binder / JupyterHub links for launching. (this is what necessitated the above two PRs)
 
-[^1]: This actually required an interesting bit of team discussion that was much easier with a few 2i2c staff on the JupyterHub team. The original request from Angus got interpreted as opening up the _entire hub API_ to external requests (which is a bad idea!) but we were able to quickly clarify and discuss with the JupyterHub team that this was only about a very specific API endpoint. This is the kind of communication loop that often goes haywire when you have people contributing to a project without historical relationships to the project's maintainers.
+[^1]: This actually required an interesting bit of team discussion that was much easier with a few 2i2c staff on the JupyterHub team. The original request from Angus was interpreted as opening up the _entire hub API_ to external requests (which is a bad idea!) but we were able to quickly discuss this with the JupyterHub team to clarify that this was only about a very specific API endpoint. This is the kind of communication loop that often goes haywire when you have people contributing to a project without historical relationships to the project's maintainers.
 
 As a result of this upstream contribution loop, JupyterHub can now accept API requests at its "service discovery" endpoint, which means that Jupyter Book (and any other web application) can more easily learn about a hub's capabilities and version.
 
-We wanted to share this short vignette because it's a good reflection of the kind of value that 2i2c tries to provide, given its role in helping to build and enhance networks of infrastructure, domain communities, and open source communities.In this case, we enabled a _cross-project_ workflow that required knowledge of each project and a vision for how they could be used together in a way that was greater than the some of its parts.
+We wanted to share this short vignette because it's a good reflection of the kind of value that 2i2c tries to provide, given its role in helping to build and enhance networks of infrastructure, domain communities, and open source communities. In this case, we enabled a _cross-project_ workflow that required knowledge of each project, and a vision for how they could be used together in a way that exceeded the sum of their parts.
 
 We think there's a lot more potential in these kinds of workflows, and are eager to continue our work to identify and enhance community-centric infrastructure for interactive computing.